Friday, September 27, 2013

Group 5

Group #5
Sept.17th, 2013
ENGL 191 section 28
Jasmin Sainju, Faisal Alsultan, Abdulhameed Aljahdali, Yipeng Liu, Moheemed Alwaaly.


Little Princess: Chapter Analysis


Little Princes: One Man's Promise to Bring Home the Lost Children of Nepal is a story written by Conor Grennan regarding child trafficking. This analysis paper aims to discuss the part five of the book which is entitled as Liz. This will allow the reader to understand the concept of part five ‘Liz’ in context of the book provided by the author.

As a matter of fact, Liz was Grennan’s friend at the time when he was involved in saving the lives of children who were abducted from their homes and sold to people involved in human trafficking. The chapter discusses that Liz has been very supportive to Grennan. She was a social worker and loved to help people in need. The author noted that Liz fell in love with those children and felt that it was her own children. Although she knew that Grennan was going to risk his life, Liz never stopped him.

 Furthermore, Grennan realized that he likes Liz and that she would make a perfect match for him. He was nervous to approach her at first. However, later in the chapter he did what his heart told him to. He proposed Liz and they were together thereafter. Liz wasn't just an email pal to Grennan. She was more than that. She was his inspiration. Though not present physically, Liz was always with him through her emails. Her presence in Grennan's life whether it be through emails or in person always encouraged him. In fact, the chapter pertains to inform the readers that Liz ultimately became a motivation force to Grennan.

 The meaning that comes forth from the part five of the book is that Liz was able to picture herself in the position of those children and she believed that there was nothing more imperative than saving those children. The chapter also gives an indication that Liz wanted to acknowledged the achievement of Grennan in her work so as to spread the information regarding children and especially little girls being abducted  all over the world.  
 
Group 5
Sept.17th, 2013
ENGL 191, Section 28
Jasmin Sainju, Faisal Alsultan, Abdulhameed Aljahdali, Yipeng Liu, Moheemed Alwaaly
 
Little Princes
          Description: Liz
This part of the novel talked about Liz coming to Nepal, Grennan telling his story of Humla to the children of Dhaulagiri. This part also mentioned finding Bishnu, the last one of the seven children for whom Grennan came back to Nepal.
In this part, Liz, Grennan’s email friend who by now was more than just a friend came to Nepal.  This was when Grennan just returned from about a month long journey from Humla.  Grennan was excited to tell his story to everyone and at the same time fascinated by hearing Liz’s voice instead of reading her email. Back in “next generation Nepal” he learned that now have twenty six children. However, the rescue of the children living in Dhaulagiri had not gone as planned. They were not able do anything about the child trafficker. The situation got worse when the traffickers made it seem as if the author and his friends were trying to steal children.
Two days later, Liz met with the children. The children especially girls seem to like her at once.  Then came the time when Grennan showed the pictures of their parents to the children. Each and every child looked happy to see their parents’ picture and to know that they still care about them except two orphans Raju and Priya. Grennan couldn’t have told them anything more than the harsh reality of their life that their parents were not alive. The day Liz left; Connor had a hard time asking Liz to come back. However, He gathered all his courage and told her that the children would be more than happy to see her again. Liz on her side replied that she would love to meet them again too.
Almost a week since they had spoken, Liz came back to Nepal and spent time with Grennan and the children for about seven days. They were happy and enjoyed being together. Two weeks after Liz left, Grennan went to the English language bookstore in Thamel and bought a bible just to get to know Liz better.
 
            On January 30, he got a call from Jacky who tells him that Gyan has located ‘Bishnu’ the last one of the seven children. But the problem was Bishnu was sold as a domestic slave to a wealthy businessman of Nepal. It was a difficult situation. The person was not willing to hand Bishnu to them. The person pushed Grennans hand aside and grabbed the doorknob when Grennan refuse to give Bishnu back. Jacky then quickly called the mayor. When the Mayor shouted at the bank manager, the bank walked out with all the anger in his head.  Later, Grennan realized that the only person who believed that finding Bishnu was possible was Liz.
Liz and Grennan continued writing many times every day. They were writing about their days and what did they do on that day. Even more, not only Grennan was interested in Liz’s life there were also two girls from Dhaulagiri where he was in that time. The two girls were thinking that Grennan and Liz were more than friends even when he told them that they were just friends. As a result, Grennan told Liz to e-mail the girls and say that we are just friend so that they believe him. Grennan hinted in his e-mails that he would like her to come and visit him. After a month Liz said that she will come to visit him. Grennan was excited when he got the news and told everyone. Liz stayed with him for a short and fun seven days. After that visit Grennan started to love her and misses her, also Liz had the same feeling and she told him many times how she wanted to be with Grennan. Eventually, Grennan proposed her and they are together since then.
This part of the novel gave light on Liz meeting Grennan, Grennan reuniting the children with their parents, Grennan finding the seveth child and Grennan proposing Liz. In conclusion, this was pretty happy ending.

 

Tuesday, September 10, 2013

I have problems with particular parts of a paper -- introductions, thesis statements, conclusions.


Mahmoud aboaljadaiel.

Faisal Alsultan.

Group #8

 

 

How to write introduction, thesis statement and conclusion.

Introduction:

An essay’s introduction is usually a single paragraph that introduces the reader to the essay’s subject matter. Also an introduction it must be the “first paragraph (or paragraphs) of any written work” (Leo). A good introduction has many features.  The first of these is the "hook" which draws the reader into the paper.

 

The introduction does the following:

·         Grapes the reader’s attention

·         Introduces the reader to the essay’s topic

·         State the essay’s thesis

 

 What goes on in an introduction?

·         Hook sentences

·         Supporting sentences

·         Thesis statement

 

 

 

What is the Thesis Statement?

 

The thesis statement is a sentence (or sentences) that state the main idea or argument in the essay. Also the thesis statement is not the title and it must be a complete sentence that explains in some detail what you expect to write about. However, the thesis statement provides the point to prove, presents the argument your essay in a concise form and gives the structure the essay will follow.

 

 

Types of thesis statement: there are two types of thesis statements.

·         An Open Thesis does not contain the body points.

Example, everyone should drive a hybrid car

·         A Closed Thesis includes the points.

Example, everyone should drive a hybrid car because they pollute less, they get better mileage, and they help reduce gasoline costs.

 

 What is the Conclusion?

As we learned the conclusion is the last paragraph in the essay that includes the main point and summarizing the whole body paragraphs. Also, it could state the opinions, suggestions or wishes of the writer. According to Uni learning website “the conclusion is the function of the essay’s conclusion is to restate the main argument”.

Sunday, September 8, 2013

review of the book Little Princes

 

      Little Princes is a book about thirty-year-old man named Conor Gernnan how needed a change in his life. It started when he was bored from his job and needed to break the daily Routine of his life. Conor decided to take an adventure and volunteering in an orphanage in one of the poorest country in the world for one year. He decided to spend all of his savings to do this adventure. Conor started his journey in Nepal in an orphanage called little princes he stated there for three months. Conor developed a since of relationship with the orphans in Little Princes. Conor traveled over sixteen countries before he returned home after one year of adventure.  After that Conor was missing Nepal so he decided to go back to Nepal for another three months to end hes travel after he promised the orphans that he will come back. After the three months Conor went back to his home, several months later the civil war in Nepal got worse and seven of the children were lost. This novel opened my eyes to a window that I never looked from. Volunteering in one of the poorest country in the world is one of the noble things that anyone can do. Conor Gernnan is an inspiring person that did a thing that not many people do. My first imprtion was that conor going to be the hero in his novel; however, he convinced my otherwise Conor was a man how cared about the children that nobody cared about. I enjoyed reading this inspiring and motivational novel. When Conor returned the third time to Nepal to find the lost orphans and the civil war was going on that was a brave thing that even most of the volunteers don’t do. Trafficking Children is one of the common crimes that happens in poor countries. Moreover, I liked how Conor founded Next Generation Nepal organization that helps trafficked children. It showed how he was really determent on helping the trafficked children. I also looked up Next Generation Nepal website and read how they helped the children in Nepal. And I didn’t know that a portion of this book would go to Next Generation Nepal organization. I would definitely recommend this book to others as I enjoyed reading it. I also looked at the pictures of Conor adventures in the book and in the website of Next Generation Nepal and it gave me a since of what Conor went through.

reasons to travel to Nepal

P 6-7


Conor Grennan was board of his life and he needed a change. He needed something to get him out of the work Routine. Conor decided to go to trip around the world for a year. He had some savings from an eight years job. Also, to get himself from criticism on spending his entire savings on a vacation, he decided to volunteer in an orphanage. One thing that surprised Conor is his friends reaction to his decision. They weren’t supportive to his decision as he thought they would. However, Conor was determent in his adventure. When Conor Grennan first arrived Nepal for his trip to a round the world he described his first reaction to Nepal.



P 35-55


When Conor was going to leave Nepal and the orphanage he didn’t think it would be hard. Unlike what Conor thought it was hard on him to say good-bye. After spending long time with the kids he developed a father son relation ship with the orphans. However, he had to say good-bye to the kids. When he was confronting the orphans about him leaving. He wasn’t planning to comeback to the orphanage again Conor thought volunteering in an orphanage is one in alive time. Also, little princes staff advised him not to till the orphans that he will be back. However, Conor promised them that he will be back.

Tuesday, September 3, 2013

peer evaluation

Adam Block
Yu Fan
Grant Schow



peer evaluation

who I am


Hello,

            My name is Faisal Alsultan I am from Riyadh, Saudi Arabia. I was born in Washington DC 22 years ago. When I was two years old my family went back to Saudi Arabia. I have a family of two parents and three brothers and two little sisters.  I came from a military officers family my father was in the Saudi army and one of my brothers is in the Saudi national guards and two in the Saudi navy. So, I am the only member of my family how is not in the military.

            I enjoy most kinds of sports. I was in one of the major soccer teams in Riyadh. I was until middle school after that I quite the team and focused on my studies in high school. Now I play soccer and go to the gym every now and then. I also look forward to the upcoming football season.

            I graduated from high school three years ago after that I decided to complete my education in The United States. I studied the English language for nine months in Chicago. After I completed my English proficiency I applied to St Cloud State. This is my second year in SCSU. I’m majoring in Business and hopefully I will graduate in two more years. So far I like Minnesota with it’s cold winters.

            After I graduate from SCSU I plan to complete my study and get a master in MBA. So I can help my father in his business.

I am very much looking forward to this class.