My Forth interview

(1) Interview preparations:

Anna is a nursing student. She has been her in the United States for three years now. Anna is my neighbor in the building. I asked her to make an interview and she agreed. The interview took place my apartment after I invited her. The interview took a half hour.

(2) Interview report:

 The interview went great I felt comfortable and the interviewee looked comfortable. The only thing that I didn’t do great is that I should have asked for more details in some of the questions. However, the interview went great I felt comfortable and the interviewee looked comfortable. The interviewee was able to answer my questions in a very clear way. She was very open to any questions. And I enjoyed doing the interview.

(3) Country Report:

China is a vast country located in East Asia. According to

Global Sherpa website, “China has influenced the course of international development for thousands of years. With more than 1.35 billion people (even with the one child per family policy), China accounts for roughly 20 percent of the total world population”(1). However, This policy is going to change according to global times news, “China's population of 1.35 billion will not see a major spike after the country relaxes the family planning policy to allow couples to have two children if one of the parents is an only child, authorities said on Saturday”(2).

There are many religions in China. For a country that is 1.35 billion it is not a strange thing. Buddhism is the most follower religion in china with “a figure of 100 million Buddhist believers”(3). Daoism is also one of the biggest religions in china, “there are “over 100 million” Daoists in China” (4).

 References

 1. global sherpa.org

 2. global times

 3. chsource.org

 4. chsource.org

(4) Interview transcription

Faisal: how do you communicate with each other in your home country?

Anna: we speak Chinese and we use sell phones and Internet.

Faisal: what is the clothing style for men and women?

Anna: The traditional clothing style for women is called qipao which is basically a long dress and the traditional clothing style for men is called tang. However, today people are more influenced by American and European style of clothing.
Faisal: how are women and men treated differently?

Anna: there are no difference between men and women. But men have more power over women. They get higher jobs than women.

Faisal: how has your experience here helped you interpret and respect cultural differences?

Anna: United States is different than my country. I learned a lot of things here that other wise maybe I would not learned back home. I met a lot of people from all over the world.

Faisal: do you enjoy speaking with other exchange students?

Anna: yes, I have many friends from other countries and I like talking with thim and help each other with the school.

Faisal: how long have you been in the United States?

Anna: I have been here for three years.

Faisal: do you like it here?

Anna: yes of course.

Faisal: have you been able to visit any other parts of the United States?

Anna: yes, I have been in New York, Washington DC, San Francisco and Los Angeles.

Faisal: what are your home country's major religions?

Anna: My home country major religion is Buddhism. And there are some atheist people in my home country.

Faisal: What influenced you to come to the United States? Especially, Saint Cloud State?

Anna: I came here to the United Starts for the good quality school and to learn English.

Faisal: do you have any questions for me? I have asked so many of you?

Anna: No, Thank you.

Faisal: Thank you.

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Mattson, Valerie M
Asiri, Mohammed Y
Block, Adam M

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My Third interview

(1) Interview preparations:

I met Danny in the library on Sunday evening. Danny is a business student here in St Cloud State University. He has been here in the United States for two years.

(2) Interview report:

The interview was great; I enjoyed the time doing the interview. Also the interviewee looked comfortable and able to answer all of the questions clearly .

(3) Country Report:

China is a vast country located in East Asia. According to

Global Sherpa website, “China has influenced the course of international development for thousands of years. With more than 1.35 billion people (even with the one child per family policy), China accounts for roughly 20 percent of the total world population”(1). However, This policy is going to change according to global times news, “China's population of 1.35 billion will not see a major spike after the country relaxes the family planning policy to allow couples to have two children if one of the parents is an only child, authorities said on Saturday”(2).

There are many religions in China. For a country that is 1.35 billion it is not a strange thing. Buddhism is the most follower religion in china with “a figure of 100 million Buddhist believers”(3). Daoism is also one of the biggest religions in china, “there are “over 100 million” Daoists in China” (4).

1. global sherpa.org

2. global times

3. chsource.org

4. chsource.org

(3) Interview transcription:

Faisal: How do you communicate with each other in your home country?

Danny: We often communicate with each other in Chinese. We also like to chat in lunch or dinner time by the dinning table.

Faisal: What is the clothing style for men and women?

Danny: Usually men ware dark colors like black or dark blue and women usually ware brighter colors like pink or red

Faisal: How are women and men treated differently?

Danny: In my country I believe that men and women have equal rights. They have the same rights in the society. Also the women have rights and they can do the work that man can do.

Faisal: How has your experience here helped you interpret and respect cultural differences?

Danny: I had a lot of experiences her in the US that helped me to respect the cultural differences. There are a lot of things that people in the US do differently than people in my country. These experiences made me more knowledge about the people around the world.

Faisal: Do you enjoy speaking with other exchange students?

Danny: Yes.

Faisal: Why?

Danny: I think talking with other exchange students is helpful. And I also learned a lot about other cultures.

Faisal: How long have you been in the United States?

Danny: I have been her for two year. I came to The United States in 2011.

Faisal: Have you been able to visit any other parts of the United States?

Danny: I have been in New York, San Francisco and Chicago.

Faisal: What are your home country’s major religions?

Danny: There are many religions in my country. However, most of the people in China are atheist.

Faisal: What influenced you to come to the United States? Especially, Saint Cloud State?

Danny: To complete my education and also because of the good quality of the school.

Faisal: Do you have any questions for me? I have asked so many of you!

Danny: No thank you.

Faisal: Thank you.

Second posting of interview 2 because it is hiding.

(1) Interview preparations:

I met Vong in the library and I asked her to make an interview for English class. Vong is a nursing student in St Cloud State University; she was born in Vietnam and she is from China. She has been her in the United States of America for four years. He accepted the invitation and we scheduled the meeting in Sunday afternoon in the library. I printed two copies of the questions that I will be asking him and meet him in the library. I gave him one copy of the questions and asked his permeation to record the interview.

2) Interview report:

The interview went great I felt comfortable and the interviewee looked comfortable. The interviewee was able to answer my questions in a very clear way. She was very open to any questions. And I enjoyed doing the interview.

(3) Country Report:

China is a vast country located in East Asia. According to

Global Sherpa website, “China has influenced the course of international development for thousands of years. With more than 1.35 billion people (even with the one child per family policy), China accounts for roughly 20 percent of the total world population”(1). However, This policy is going to change according to global times news, “China's population of 1.35 billion will not see a major spike after the country relaxes the family planning policy to allow couples to have two children if one of the parents is an only child, authorities said on Saturday”(2).

There are many religions in China. For a country that is 1.35 billion it is not a strange thing. Buddhism is the most follower religion in china with “a figure of 100 million Buddhist believers”(3). Daoism is also one of the biggest religions in china, “there are “over 100 million” Daoists in China” (4).

References

1. global sherpa.org

2. global times

3. chsource.org

4. chsource.org

(4) Interview transcription

Faisal: how do you communicate with each other in your home country?

Vong: I usually communicate with my friends and family in Vietnamese and Cantonese.

Faisal: what is the clothing style for men and women?

Vong: the clothing style in my country is very similar to America, not that much big difference, Because of the influence of the media television and Internet. But for the younger generation Korean prefer Korean style.

Faisal: how are women and men treated differently?

Vong: of course in my country, men considered higher states than women. So for example in my country mostly when female just study in high school most of them will drop out from school, so not a lot of them can make it all the way to collage.

Faisal: how has your experience here helped you interpret and respect cultural differences?

Vong: absolutely. Because when I came to the US I exposed to a completely different new culture, the food the language the way people think and it just make me more humble and be respectful to other cultures and I will love to learn new things everyday.

Faisal: do you enjoy speaking with other exchange students?

Vong: yes absolutely. I love to speak and know other students especially exchange students because they are coming from another country and have the opportunity to learn and open there views. So it is very interesting to know a lot of exchange students because we can learn from each other.

Faisal: how long have you been in the United States?

Vong: I have been in the US for four years now.

Faisal: have you been able to visit any other parts of the United States?

Vong: I have been visit a couple of places in the United States Florida, Oregon, Washington DC, New York, Pennsylvania, Las Vegas, Los Angeles, Arizona and here in Minnesota of course.

Faisal: what are your home country's major religions?

Vong: My home country major religion is Buddhism.

Faisal: what do you do in your free time?

Vong: I usually read books and play piano in my free time.

Faisal: what is your Favorite Sport?

Vong: my favorite sport is basketball.

Faisal: what are the famous foods in your country?

Vong: the famous food in my country is Pho which is like chicken noodle soup.

Faisal: do you have any questions for me? I have asked so many of you?

Vong: No, Thank you.

Faisal: Thank you.

My second interview

(1)  Interview preparations:

I met Vong in the library and I asked her to make an interview for English class. Vong is a nursing student in St Cloud State University; she was born in Vietnam and she is from China. She has been her in the United States of America for four years. He accepted the invitation and we scheduled the meeting in Sunday afternoon in the library. I printed two copies of the questions that I will be asking him and meet him in the library. I gave him one copy of the questions and asked his permeation to record the interview.

2)   Interview report:

 The interview went great I felt comfortable and the interviewee looked comfortable. The interviewee was able to answer my questions in a very clear way. She was very open to any questions. And I enjoyed doing the interview.

(3)  Country Report:

China is a vast country located in East Asia. According to

Global Sherpa website, “China has influenced the course of international development for thousands of years. With more than 1.35 billion people (even with the one child per family policy), China accounts for roughly 20 percent of the total world population”(1). However, This policy is going to change according to global times news, “China's population of 1.35 billion will not see a major spike after the country relaxes the family planning policy to allow couples to have two children if one of the parents is an only child, authorities said on Saturday”(2).

There are many religions in China. For a country that is 1.35 billion it is not a strange thing. Buddhism is the most follower religion in china with “a figure of 100 million Buddhist believers”(3). Daoism is also one of the biggest religions in china, “there are “over 100 million” Daoists in China” (4). 

 References

 1. global sherpa.org

 2. global times

 3. chsource.org

 4. chsource.org

(4)  Interview transcription

Faisal: how do you communicate with each other in your home country?

Vong: I usually communicate with my friends and family in Vietnamese and Cantonese.

Faisal: what is the clothing style for men and women?

Vong: the clothing style in my country is very similar to America, not that much big difference, Because of the influence of the media television and Internet. But for the younger generation Korean prefer Korean style.

Faisal: how are women and men treated differently?

Vong: of course in my country, men considered higher states than women. So for example in my country mostly when female just study in high school most of them will drop out from school, so not a lot of them can make it all the way to collage.

Faisal: how has your experience here helped you interpret and respect cultural differences?

Vong: absolutely. Because when I came to the US I exposed to a completely different new culture, the food the language the way people think and it just make me more humble and be respectful to other cultures and I will love to learn new things everyday.

Faisal: do you enjoy speaking with other exchange students?

Vong: yes absolutely. I love to speak and know other students especially exchange students because they are coming from another country and have the opportunity to learn and open there views. So it is very interesting to know a lot of exchange students because we can learn from each other.

Faisal: how long have you been in the United States?

Vong: I have been in the US for four years now.

Faisal: have you been able to visit any other parts of the United States?

Vong: I have been visit a couple of places in the United States Florida, Oregon, Washington DC, New York, Pennsylvania, Las Vegas, Los Angeles, Arizona and here in Minnesota of course. 

Faisal: what are your home country's major religions?

Vong: My home country major religion is Buddhism.

Faisal: what do you do in your free time?

Vong: I usually read books and play piano in my free time.

Faisal: what is your Favorite Sport?

Vong: my favorite sport is basketball.

Faisal: what are the famous foods in your country?

Vong: the famous food in my country is Pho which is like chicken noodle soup.

Faisal: do you have any questions for me? I have asked so many of you?

Vong: No, Thank you.

Faisal: Thank you.

Interview competition 1

The best three interviews are:

1- Mattson, Valerie M
2- Alamer, Mohammed Saud M
3- Sainju, Jasmin


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My first interview

(1)  Interview preparations:

I met Kevin in a class that I have with him and I asked him to make an interview for English class. Kevin is a business student in St Cloud State University, he is from Sothern china in a small town called Loudi, China. He has been her in the United States of America for two years. He accepted the invitation and we scheduled the meeting in Sunday afternoon in the library. I printed two copies of the questions that I will be asking him and meet him in the library. I gave him one copy of the questions and asked his permeation to record the interview.

(2)   Interview report:

 The interview went great I felt comfortable and the interviewee looked comfortable. The only thing that I didn’t do great is that I should have asked for more details in some of the questions  

(3)  Country Report:

China is country in East Asia and one of the biggest countries in the world. China is the most populated country in the world with more than 1.35 billion. China is located in Eastern Asia, bordering the East China Sea, Korea Bay, Yellow Sea, and South China Sea, between North Korea and Vietnam. China is slightly smaller then the US in size and the climate is similar to the US’s. China Geography is mostly mountains and high plateaus, and deserts in the west. In the east it is mostly plains, deltas and hills. China has many natural resources they are; coal, iron ore, petroleum, natural gas, mercury, tin, tungsten, antimony, manganese, molybdenum, vanadium, magnetite, aluminum, lead, zinc, rare earth elements, uranium, hydropower potential (world's largest). The capital on China is Beijing. The government in China is communist but the people get to elect their president who can serve up to two five-year terms. China has many different festivals but the most important one is the Chinese New Year. This is the time when debts are settled and houses are cleaned. Time is spending with family and friends.

References

"Central Intelligence Agency." The World Factbook. N.p., n.d. Web. 22 Oct. 2013.           Retrieved from: https://www.cia.gov/library/publications/the-world-  factbook/geos/ch.html

(4)  Interview transcription

Faisal: How do you communicate with each other in your home country?

Kevin: We speck Chinese and when we communicate with each others we always use sell phones and use computers. And sometimes we go to a party and we eat together.

Faisal: What is the clothing style for men and women?

Kevin: For the clothing style do you mean traditional.

Faisal: Yes, the traditional.

Kevin: For the women we have qipao that’s for. And for the men we have tang suit.

Faisal: How do men and women dress now?

Kevin: dress like American people they wear suits very professional suit and young people wear fashion cloths. And women are more fashion and not many people wear traditional clothes.

Faisal: How are women and men treated differently?

Kevin: Women and men now are nowadays not a big difference anymore. I think the only difference maybe is in the politics, the women cannot be a very high position in the politics. The other things are the same, women can drive as the men, women can go to school as men, women has more rights. And maybe sometimes in some things have discrimination, because they regulate women having a baby. Because if you have baby you need to take care of the baby you don’t have time to do work and sometimes some companies need a man to do this kind of jobs, because the women not like a man in strength so that the women cannot do some very heavy work.  

Faisal: How has your experience here helped you interpret and respect cultural differences?

Kevin: Because I have experienced the culture shock. I heard that in Saudi Arabia they cannot eat pork. So I respect the cultural difference and I know that the women in Saudi Arabia need to wear scarf. So maybe if we are curious about scarf and we open it, is not allowed. It is really serious. When I first came to America I learned about those cultural things so I understand their culture and respect the cultural differences.  

Faisal: Do you enjoy speaking with other exchange students?

Kevin: Yes, I also speak with a lot of American people, But I more likely to speak with other exchange students. Because we all use other second language and we have more common living in The United States because we are Foreigners here. So I want to speak with them to know them and be friends with them.

Faisal: How long have you been in the United States?

Kevin: I have been here for two and a half years.

Faisal: Have you been able to visit any other parts of the United States?

Kevin: Yes. I went to a lot of places. I went to Miami, I went to Orlando, and I went to New York, I went to Chicago. 

Faisal: What are your home country’s major religions?

Kevin: My home country major religion is Buddhism Taoism.

Faisal: What influenced you to come to the United States? Especially, Saint Cloud State?

Kevin: I think why I came to here the thing, which really influenced me, is English. I came here to learn English. And get my English improve I knew American before I come here, I know that American as good as our imagination just they have bad things but they are still good. Maybe when I came here two and a half years ago they influenced my heart and my attitude. I think it makes me more mature than I was in China because I need to do any thing by my self and get help when I want to and may be no body can help you your self and it makes you think a lot you need to learn a lot of things, because it’s not like yore home country. When your parents will take care of you, you need to take care of your self. So it is really a challenge for us and we learn a lot from these challenges and we get more mature.

Faisal: And what made you chose Saint Cloud State?

Kevin: I choose this school because of my friend. He was here and he recommended this school to me and this school has very low tuition and this school kind of beautiful and good quality school. So I acme to here

Faisal: Do you have any questions for me?

Kevin: No, it is just nice to meet you.

Faisal: nice to meet you too.

Challenges and benefits of interviewing an international student

Girum Negussie ,Shukri Aden, Sajjad Rabaan and Faisal Alsultan


Challenges and benefits of interviewing an international student

interviewing an international student mean the interviewer has to consider who would be the interviewee and then might face a hard time to find the ways approaching a person due to differences in lifestyles. However, those challenges are a great way to achieve knowledge about different cultures.

language barrier is the most challenge in interviewing with an international student. Understanding the interviewee is very important. Also, knowing that the interviewee understand the questions that he was asked is the key to make them answer and talk.Some information may be difficult to understand and boring but we must have to handle any kind of situation.

When we talks about the benefits of interviewing an international students All over the world the coming in the united states, you have a little opportunity to go there known everything, but to interview an international student is a good chance to get detail information about other countries. During the interviewing, people can learn and know a lot of cultures about the country; also people can compare the difference and similarity cultures between their own countries. On other hand, people usually will use the English for interviewing, so that is helpful to our English skills. Interviewing bring us benefits of discovering other cultures as well as life styles and on the other hand reflect our own culture by looking at peoples ways of thinking

In conclusion, interviewing an international student make people face some challenges finding and approaching interviewees at first but obviously, the interviewing process would bring many benefits since interviewers will be able to achieve knowledge about another cultures as well as their own culture.

Objectives

My objectives are learning about another person’s culture, religion, region and way of life. By Interviewing with another people from different region I will learn how other people live their lives differently.

 

1. Tell me about yourself and your family.

2. How do you feel about schools in us? How is it different than your country?

3. How are relationships, friendship and marriage in your hometown?

4. How do you celebrate holidays?  

5. How dose religion affects you?

6. What does the culture in your hometown mean to you?

7. What are the famous foods in your country?

8. Thank you for your time and effort, I had the pleaser doing this interview with you. Do you have any questions for me?

Page 15 Summary

Before traveling to Moscow one has to decide wither to travel in a group or individual.  Either way there are many agencies that will provide all the available experiences that you will get in Moscow. There are many ways to travel in a group to Moscow. There is the regular way of traveling which is sight-seeing package tour. Also, for individual traveler, there is a group that is joined from individual travelers that usually don’t know each other. These groups are fairly big containing between twenty five to forty people. These groups combine standard features “First class hotel accommodations, tree full meals daily with full board, transportation, sight-seeing excursions, entrance fees and tour guide”(1). The second form of group travel is group with special interest. These groups get interest related tour programs form wide variety of activity and trips. These tours also include Airline travel and hotels booking. I also found an expansion to this topic in the book Fodor’s Moscow. The book Fodor’s Moscow has more information on the group travel.  “The price of these group travel with special interest range wide, but usually higher than escorted tours and programs”(2). Both travel plans are available with great tourist experiences in Moscow. Most travel agents will provide you with all of these options and more. The travel agents can also provide guided tours and excursions. While searching in to expand the summarized topic I found the book Eyewitness Travel Guides Moscow share the same topic. In the book Eyewitness Travel Guides Moscow, that the Travel agencies operate most of bus tours in Moscow these bus tours are the most popular way of tours in the city. “The Intourist agency offers a wide range of tours, mainly to the most well-known sights. Patriarshiy Dom Tours offers a range of tours in English”(3). 





Works cited: 

(1) Anya Kucharev, “Information Moscow Western Edition. Ed” 7th edition 1987, U. Information Moscow, San Francisco, Page 14-16

(2) Christopher Billy, “Fodor’s Moscow” First edition 1994, Fodor’s Travel Publications, New York, Page 4

 

(3) Marcus Hardy, “Eyewitness Travel Guides Moscow” First edition 1998, DK Publishing, New York, Page 198

 

Five of classmates review

Abdulaziz Aldawihis

Abdulaziz Aldawihis chose the cultural life of everyday conversation by S.I.Salamensky. He chose the book because he wants to know about different culture. The book printed in New York and London and published in 2001.


MaryJean Hemp

MaryJean Hemp chose Emotion and Imagination by Adam Morton. MaryJean chose this book because she is interested in psychology and the human mind. "Emotion and Imagination" was published in the United States and the United Kingdom in 2013.

Mohammed Alamer

Mohammed Alamer chose West Africa Today by Nancy L. Hoeple. Mohammed chose this book because he wants to learn more about West Africa culture. West Africa Today was printed in the United States of America in 1971


Mohammed Asiri

Mohammed Asiri chose In Our Village by Barbara Cervone. Mohammed chose this book because he did a research about African American culture and wanted more information about the subject. In Our Village was printed in Hong Kong in 2006



Grant Schow

Grant Schow chose Acts of Recovery by Jeffrey Hart. Grant chose this book because he wants to learn about economy. Acts of Recovery was printed in London in 1989.

 

Library Book

1. Why did you select the book you brought to class?

I chose the book because I like to know about author countries and I find Moscow on of the cities that I want to visit.

2. How many authors does it have? Some books have none: they have an editor.

The editor is Anya Kucharev

3. What is the title?

Information Moscow Western Edition

4. Who printed the book? Re-printed? Distributed in the US?

It was printed by U. Information Moscow in the US

5. Which city was it printed in, and when?

It was printed in San Francisco, CA 7th Edition in 1987

Research Tips and Tutorials

      Research Assistance links on the library webpage is very helpful. It had many tips and guides to be used. As we know library help students in their projects. The links can help every student with their writing assignments.  In “Research tips and tutorials” you can start research and select the resources and use the information you find by the library. “Library 101” this section help you to research and get the papers of research very fast. “How to find hot topics” it’s help you to select topic and find the important information about the topic. “Information cycle” helps you to make sure about resources. “Library resources and services for graduate students” also, in this part it is helping you to research, interlibrary loan, and many things. Also there are many links to help you to find scholar and popular articles. Moreover, there are tips that show how to evaluate the information from online sources, journals, books, web pages and web sites. Finally, the link provides criteria to use the information that you found by citation styles which are APA, MLA, Chicago, Turabian and other citation styles

Group 5

Group #5

Sept.17^th, 2013

ENGL 191 section 28

Jasmin Sainju, Faisal Alsultan, Abdulhameed Aljahdali, Yipeng Liu, Moheemed Alwaaly.

Little Princess: Chapter Analysis

Little Princes: One Man's Promise to Bring Home the Lost Children of Nepal is a story written by Conor Grennan regarding child trafficking. This analysis paper aims to discuss the part five of the book which is entitled as Liz. This will allow the reader to understand the concept of part five ‘Liz’ in context of the book provided by the author.

As a matter of fact, Liz was Grennan’s friend at the time when he was involved in saving the lives of children who were abducted from their homes and sold to people involved in human trafficking. The chapter discusses that Liz has been very supportive to Grennan. She was a social worker and loved to help people in need. The author noted that Liz fell in love with those children and felt that it was her own children. Although she knew that Grennan was going to risk his life, Liz never stopped him.

 Furthermore, Grennan realized that he likes Liz and that she would make a perfect match for him. He was nervous to approach her at first. However, later in the chapter he did what his heart told him to. He proposed Liz and they were together thereafter. Liz wasn't just an email pal to Grennan. She was more than that. She was his inspiration. Though not present physically, Liz was always with him through her emails. Her presence in Grennan's life whether it be through emails or in person always encouraged him. In fact, the chapter pertains to inform the readers that Liz ultimately became a motivation force to Grennan.

 The meaning that comes forth from the part five of the book is that Liz was able to picture herself in the position of those children and she believed that there was nothing more imperative than saving those children. The chapter also gives an indication that Liz wanted to acknowledged the achievement of Grennan in her work so as to spread the information regarding children and especially little girls being abducted  all over the world.  

 

Group 5

Sept.17^th, 2013

ENGL 191, Section 28

Jasmin Sainju, Faisal Alsultan, Abdulhameed Aljahdali, Yipeng Liu, Moheemed Alwaaly

 

Little Princes

          Description: Liz

This part of the novel talked about Liz coming to Nepal, Grennan telling his story of Humla to the children of Dhaulagiri. This part also mentioned finding Bishnu, the last one of the seven children for whom Grennan came back to Nepal.

In this part, Liz, Grennan’s email friend who by now was more than just a friend came to Nepal.  This was when Grennan just returned from about a month long journey from Humla.  Grennan was excited to tell his story to everyone and at the same time fascinated by hearing Liz’s voice instead of reading her email. Back in “next generation Nepal” he learned that now have twenty six children. However, the rescue of the children living in Dhaulagiri had not gone as planned. They were not able do anything about the child trafficker. The situation got worse when the traffickers made it seem as if the author and his friends were trying to steal children.

Two days later, Liz met with the children. The children especially girls seem to like her at once.  Then came the time when Grennan showed the pictures of their parents to the children. Each and every child looked happy to see their parents’ picture and to know that they still care about them except two orphans Raju and Priya. Grennan couldn’t have told them anything more than the harsh reality of their life that their parents were not alive. The day Liz left; Connor had a hard time asking Liz to come back. However, He gathered all his courage and told her that the children would be more than happy to see her again. Liz on her side replied that she would love to meet them again too.

Almost a week since they had spoken, Liz came back to Nepal and spent time with Grennan and the children for about seven days. They were happy and enjoyed being together. Two weeks after Liz left, Grennan went to the English language bookstore in Thamel and bought a bible just to get to know Liz better.

 

            On January 30, he got a call from Jacky who tells him that Gyan has located ‘Bishnu’ the last one of the seven children. But the problem was Bishnu was sold as a domestic slave to a wealthy businessman of Nepal. It was a difficult situation. The person was not willing to hand Bishnu to them. The person pushed Grennans hand aside and grabbed the doorknob when Grennan refuse to give Bishnu back. Jacky then quickly called the mayor. When the Mayor shouted at the bank manager, the bank walked out with all the anger in his head.  Later, Grennan realized that the only person who believed that finding Bishnu was possible was Liz.

Liz and Grennan continued writing many times every day. They were writing about their days and what did they do on that day. Even more, not only Grennan was interested in Liz’s life there were also two girls from Dhaulagiri where he was in that time. The two girls were thinking that Grennan and Liz were more than friends even when he told them that they were just friends. As a result, Grennan told Liz to e-mail the girls and say that we are just friend so that they believe him. Grennan hinted in his e-mails that he would like her to come and visit him. After a month Liz said that she will come to visit him. Grennan was excited when he got the news and told everyone. Liz stayed with him for a short and fun seven days. After that visit Grennan started to love her and misses her, also Liz had the same feeling and she told him many times how she wanted to be with Grennan. Eventually, Grennan proposed her and they are together since then.

This part of the novel gave light on Liz meeting Grennan, Grennan reuniting the children with their parents, Grennan finding the seveth child and Grennan proposing Liz. In conclusion, this was pretty happy ending.

 

I have problems with particular parts of a paper -- introductions, thesis statements, conclusions.

Mahmoud aboaljadaiel.

Faisal Alsultan.

Group #8

 

 

How to write introduction, thesis statement and conclusion.

Introduction:

An essay’s introduction is usually a single paragraph that introduces the reader to the essay’s subject matter. Also an introduction it must be the “first paragraph (or paragraphs) of any written work” (Leo). A good introduction has many features.  The first of these is the "hook" which draws the reader into the paper.

 

The introduction does the following:

·         Grapes the reader’s attention

·         Introduces the reader to the essay’s topic

·         State the essay’s thesis

 

 What goes on in an introduction?

·         Hook sentences

·         Supporting sentences

·         Thesis statement

 

 

 

What is the Thesis Statement?

 

The thesis statement is a sentence (or sentences) that state the main idea or argument in the essay. Also the thesis statement is not the title and it must be a complete sentence that explains in some detail what you expect to write about. However, the thesis statement provides the point to prove, presents the argument your essay in a concise form and gives the structure the essay will follow.

 

 

Types of thesis statement: there are two types of thesis statements.

·         An Open Thesis does not contain the body points.

Example, everyone should drive a hybrid car

·         A Closed Thesis includes the points.

Example, everyone should drive a hybrid car because they pollute less, they get better mileage, and they help reduce gasoline costs.

 

 What is the Conclusion?

As we learned the conclusion is the last paragraph in the essay that includes the main point and summarizing the whole body paragraphs. Also, it could state the opinions, suggestions or wishes of the writer. According to Uni learning website “the conclusion is the function of the essay’s conclusion is to restate the main argument”.